Hello Maile, I am Vitaraag.I love the poem. I really love how you used things that don't exist or could. For example the spaceship could be a UFO or a spaceship they use for humans. I also like how you made it really crazy and wacky. The last line is a hilarious one. You also didn't just type you made a document and made a backround. I really like that. Maybe next time you can talk about the first person on the moon. Overall it is a exeptional blog post. Keep up the phenomenal work!!!
Morena Maile, , Kueni here again from the Summer Learning Journey. I hope you are having an awesome Monday morning, I am so excited to be reading another one of your awesome blog posts.
I really enjoyed reading your blog post this morning about how you would feel if you were in Neil Armstrong's shoes, being the first human to land on the moon. What an awesome poem you have put together, the rhyming you have used is really good and I found your last line super funny!
If you travelled to the moon, what is something that you would take with you and leave on the moon as a memoir?
Keep up the hard work, I look forward to reading more of your blog posts!
Hello Maile,
ReplyDeleteI am Vitaraag.I love the poem. I really love how you used things that don't exist or could. For example the spaceship could be a UFO or a spaceship they use for humans. I also like how you made it really crazy and wacky. The last line is a hilarious one. You also didn't just type you made a document and made a backround. I really like that. Maybe next time you can talk about the first person on the moon. Overall it is a exeptional blog post. Keep up the phenomenal work!!!
Vitaraag
Morena Maile, ,
ReplyDeleteKueni here again from the Summer Learning Journey. I hope you are having an awesome Monday morning, I am so excited to be reading another one of your awesome blog posts.
I really enjoyed reading your blog post this morning about how you would feel if you were in Neil Armstrong's shoes, being the first human to land on the moon. What an awesome poem you have put together, the rhyming you have used is really good and I found your last line super funny!
If you travelled to the moon, what is something that you would take with you and leave on the moon as a memoir?
Keep up the hard work, I look forward to reading more of your blog posts!
Kueni :)