A Short Story
Duckys
There was a princess named Priscilla she always visited the pond to feed the little ducklings until her Step Mother Ally McPottons (The Queen) told construction workers to take it down. Priscilla was Heartbroken she even thought "What will happen to the ducklings!" Priscilla thought. So she made up a plan that she'll make a pond in her secret backyard. Her secret backyard was called seashore so the secret password is sheshumbush (Remember Im making these up). So she took her 5 ducklings named, Amethyst, Mary, Layla, Serenity and Britney and took them to her pond. After her Step Mother started to get suspicious because the 5 ducklings disappeared, she asked Priscilla "Have you seen 5 ducklings around here" "Nope I think our neighbours took them because last night I heard Duck noises like "Quack Quack" Priscilla lies. Priscilla acts suspicious as she was running "Where are you going?" The queen asked " To my friends house" Priscilla said quickly and then she ran. Then the queen realised that Priscilla has no friends, the queen quickly follows Priscilla and then she hears the secret password "Sheshumbush" Priscilla says the queen runs to the picture "Sheshumbush the queen says quickly. She sees the ducklings and Priscilla feeding them. The queen sprints to britney and grabs her while Priscilla is distracted by feeding Serenity. The queen grabbed Britney by the neck and ran quickly until Priscilla saw and knocked down the queen and took the five ducklings and ran. Luckily the queen jumped up and sprinted across the hallway to get Priscilla and then the queen jumped onto Priscilla. Then something happened to Layla all her guts spilled out from Priscilla falling onto her, Priscilla covered in guts. "Oh my... gosh!?!" Priscilla says in shock "Oh my gosh ew you murderer" The queen says. Priscilla decides the beat up the queen (Even though shes weak) and called the security...
To Be Continued
Hi again Maile,
ReplyDeleteThanks for that very creative story about Princess Priscilla and her five duckling! I was on the edge of my seat reading it but I felt so bad for poor little Layla :( Where did you get your inspiration from for the story?
If you were to make the story have a happy ending, what would it be?
Thanks for blogging!
Eliza :)
Malo Maile, how is your day going today? What have you been up to?
ReplyDeleteI hope your summer is going well and you’re spending lots of time resting and hanging out in the sunshine before school starts again :) I’m going to be spending this weekend swimming with my friends and family in the sun, yay!
Just a gentle reminder that the Summer Learning Journey finishes next Friday (24th January) so you have until then to do as many activities as you can. Remember that the more activities you do, the more points you gain and the higher the chance of you winning some really cool prizes!
I would also encourage you to go and have a look at all the comments we have made on your posts to see if anything needs to be edited, in order for you to get the full points available. Just let us know in the comments if you have edited or updated a post, so we know to check it out :)
Thanks for posting and we hope to see some more awesome work from you in the next week!
Eliza :
Great Story But Poor Layla You Have Such Detailed Work
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